Tuesday, November 15, 2005

American Title

Courtesy of Lady Tess, this first line of a novel competition is rather intriguing. The comments of the judges are priceless, and illuminating. Some of the sentences don't read quite right or don't really grab me, and normally one of the judges puts their finger on why. Meanwhile, I'm trying to work out which first line I like best, and why. I'm erring on one with a definite battlefield reference. How predictable am I?


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